Покритикуйте резюме Jr. Java Developer

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Ivanov Ivan
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Email: ivan.ivanov@gmail.com
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I am a Lawful U.S. Permanent Resident, eligible to work in the USA (Green Card holder)

Summary
• Highly motivated Jr. Java Developer experienced in the support of several projects (front-end and back-end development), ensuring success and quality
• Proficiency in JavaSE/J2EE: object oriented concepts, analysis, design, and programming
• Good working knowledge of: JavaScript, J2SE, SQL, Eclipse, IntelliJ IDEA, JSON, JQuery, HTML, JavaEE, AJAX, Hibernate
• Possess good problem analysis skills with ability to follow high project standards
• Over 15 years’ experience in banking and finance with useful operational expertize in greenfield business launch and run-off in terms of IT and operational support

Professional Experience

Kontorka Pomidorka
(October 2013– Present)
Jr. Java Developer
• Provided analysis of the addressed product problem , detected reasons
• Developed and implemented solutions (fixed bugs)
• Created user information solutions by developing, implementing, and maintaining Java based components and interfaces
• Cooperated with all team members, discussed and suggested possible solutions
• Developed across JEE layer application (front-end, back-end, services tier).

Key Projects Undertaken
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• Provided object-oriented analysis and design of Software Developed Life Cycle , from analysis and design to implementation and maintenance
• Designed and troubleshot updates
• Provided full coverage and was a totally dedicated and responsible contact developer for the project

Banchek1 (June 2008 - July 2013)
Senior Specialist of Lease Operations Project Team

• Managed clients’ loan portfolio from financial and operational perspective
• Tested all systems before launch
• Assisted in maintaining database to analyze life cycle of all leasing operations
• Assisted in designing, building and testing of invoices production with differentiated tax issues included

Banchek1 (August 2005 – June 2008)
Securities Services officer
• Serviced assets, managed transfer of corporate rights and covered corporate actions

Banchek1 (February 2003 - April 2004)
Banking Accountant
• Analyzed and processed all financial data related to the Bank’s activity

Banchek2 (December 1997 – December 2002)
Banking Accountant
• Analyzed and processed all financial data related to the Bank’s activity
Education & Credentials
Master of Arts Degree in Banking and Finance
IT-Centre for computer studying in Kyiv, Certified Java Developer
GlobalLogic in-house school for Java Developers

Technology and Language Proficiencies
• Strong problem-solving skills; ability to learn new development language quickly and apply that knowledge effectively
• Creative-approached, resulted-oriented, can-do attitude with deep respect to deadlines
• Excellent analytical and organizational skills, ability to multi-task and prioritize
• Detailed oriented, able to multi-task

[olegofren]

Вцелом неплохо. Проверьте ошибки спелчекером

@innna23

I am a Lawful U.S. Permanent Resident, eligible to work in the USA (Green Card holder)

Выкинуть. Если есть желание указать статус - укажите в сопроводительном письме

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• Good working knowledge of: JavaScript, J2SE, SQL, Eclipse, IntelliJ IDEA, JSON, JQuery, HTML, JavaEE, AJAX, Hibernate

SQL идет с конкрентой базой (MySQL, Oracle, etc). Укажите, с какой Вы работали

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Kontorka Pomidorka

Укажите город и веб сайт Конторки-помидорки
Укажите ваши должостные обязанности

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Key Projects Undertaken
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Напишите что за софт, для чего нужен
Укажите какие технологии использовали. Желательно, чтобы совпадал с тем, что написано в саммари

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• Provided object-oriented analysis and design of Software Developed Life Cycle , from analysis and design to implementation and maintenance

Щито? Объектно-ориентированный анализ и дизайн разработанного жизненного цикла ПО? Посмотрите внимательно первоисточник, откуда Вы это списали и спишите правильно. Или уберите.

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Banchek1 (June 2008 - July 2013)
Senior Specialist of Lease Operations Project Team

• Managed clients’ loan portfolio from financial and operational perspective
• Tested all systems before launch
• Assisted in maintaining database to analyze life cycle of all leasing operations
• Assisted in designing, building and testing of invoices production with differentiated tax issues included

Banchek1 (August 2005 – June 2008)
Securities Services officer
• Serviced assets, managed transfer of corporate rights and covered corporate actions

Banchek1 (February 2003 - April 2004)
Banking Accountant
• Analyzed and processed all financial data related to the Bank’s activity

Banchek2 (December 1997 – December 2002)
Banking Accountant
• Analyzed and processed all financial data related to the Bank’s activity

Банковский опыт выкинуть. Можно написать еще одно резюме специально для контор, которые пишут софт для банков, там указать его, а в резюме по умолчанию он не нужен

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Technology and Language Proficiencies
• Strong problem-solving skills; ability to learn new development language quickly and apply that knowledge effectively
• Creative-approached, resulted-oriented, can-do attitude with deep respect to deadlines
• Excellent analytical and organizational skills, ability to multi-task and prioritize
• Detailed oriented, able to multi-task

1. Раздел озаглавлен “Technology and Language Proficiencies”, а ни одного языка/технологии не указано.
2. Этот HR булшит я бы назвал “Personal skills” или как-то так
3. ability to multi-task упомянут 2 раза (в п. 3 и 4), вероятно, чтобы этот самый мультитаск продемонстрировать

[innna23]

Спасибо! Со всем согласна!