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Sap Security / Sap authorization
Address: Saratov,Russia
Mobile Phone: ************
E-mail: *********@yahoo.com

Objective

SAP Security consultant with hands on experience in working on SAP Security for all modules. Involved in one SAP projects starting from initial design and implementation and maintenance authorization concept and 5+ roll-out projects. Gathered experience in SAP implementation projects in Oil and Gas industry. I ‘m looking for a new position as a Sap Security/Authorization.

SUMMARY:

 Overall 1+ year experience in SAP R/3,
 1 full cycle and 5+ roll-out projects,
 Application Security experience in SAP R/3, HR, BW,
 Working knowledge of SAP Versions 4.7

 Experience in Design, Developing, Testing and Implementing SAP Security Roles, Profiles and Authorizations for various landscapes using Profile Generator.
 Experience in tool SU24 for maintenance of authorization objects.
 Design, Develop and Implementation of Security Roles for HR and BW Reporting.
 Strong in SAP application Security development by taking business requirements and building Security using the SAP Authorization Concept using Profile Generator tool (PFCG).
 Working knowledge of Segregation of Duties (SODs) analysis and auditing requirements
 Strong in developing Security authorization roles and positions as defined by application managers for the end users using Profile Generator (PFCG) tool
 Full trouble shooting support for the users authorization failures in all SAP applications and resolving the Security issues and support in integration testing of Roles/Profiles.

TBInform (TNK BP Holding), Russia
SAP ASecurity/Authorization Consultant
Apr 11 – Aug 12

Responsibilities:

 Work with profile generator (PFCG) in creating roles, profiles, composite roles, derived roles, and global roles.
 Worked with process experts on Segregation of Duties (SOD) issues.
 Transported profiles between clients within R/3 system and between R/3 systems.
 Worked on SAP Check Indicator Defaults and Field values, reduced the scope of Authorization checks using transaction SU24 and maintained check indicators for Transaction codes.
 Cleaning up of roles and profiles not being used.
 Troubleshoot security/authorization related problems using SU53, ST01 and SUIM
 Day to day technical support and resolution of Security issues.
 Effectively analyzed trace files and tracked missed authorizations for users access problems and inserted missing authorizations manually.
 Involved at 5+ roll out projects at HR module

Alor Invest, Russia
Junior Trader/Senior Trader
Aug 07 – Apr 11

 Involved at development trading strategies for stock markets.
 Traded at Russia and International markets
 Risk management clients positions
 Education junior colleagues
 Programmed in special trading software

Education:
Saratov State Technical University
Address: Saratov, Russia
Bachelor of Computer Science
September 2002 - June 2007

Languages:
English - Professional working proficiency
Russian - Native or bilingual proficiency

Interests:
Sports.

References available upon request

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An accomplished Software Architect with 17 years of extensive experience in designing and implementing state of art information solutions. Well versed in full life cycle development, including requirements definition, prototyping, and proof of concept, design, interface implementation, testing and maintenance. Capable of working on a team with people on all levels as well as independently.

Summary of Qualifications
 Strong knowledge of server side J2EE technologies, including JPA, JNDI, RMI, JDBC and EJB’s.
 Possess exceptional level of expertise in both User Interface and Server prototyping and development using Java and J2EE (JSP, Servlets), DHTML, JavaScript and XSLT or Visual C++ and MFC.
 Competent in Object-Oriented Design and Java / C++ Development, skilled at progressing from problem statement to well-documented designs.
 Have excellent problem solving skills.
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Вот пример описания бывших позиций:

Chief Software Architect,************* 2009 – 2010
********’s platform, a turnkey solution for educational institutions’ rich media needs, provides the means to digitize, archive, preserve, manage, and deliver rich media within LMS’s and other critical online learning destinations in a secure, auditable environment worldwide.
My responsibilities included providing standards, guidelines, and mentoring to establish J2EE application development and deployment architecture and integration strategy with existing enterprise systems. I designed from scratch a distributed application for media ingestion and transcoding using Flex, Spring 3, JBPM and ActiveMQ. Refactored existing architecture to improve performance and extend database support from MySql to Oracle and SQL Server.

Sr. Software Engineer,*************** 2004 – 2007
********* was the leading provider of Enterprise Security Management software.Product architecture includes communication using Message Queue; home-bred ORM API, Swing GUI, integration with different products using Web Services or integration API’s, multiple agents programs written with different technologies.
My responsibilities included: design and development of company proprietary security software for multi-industry applications using Java, JSP, JMS, multithreading, Java GUI development using Swing and JIDE , C++ , Web Services, XML, XSLT, XPath, SSL & Oracle-based software in Solaris, Red Hat and SUSE Linux and Windows environment, involved in feasibility design studies, analysis, and programming. Lead of 8 engineers located in offshore as technical lead and project architect. Worked on all product sub-systems, from front-end to back-end, performed code refactoring to improve code maintainability and performance.