Покритикуйте резюме системного аналитика

Добрый день, уважаемые форумчане.
Думал, думал (и анализировал тоже - я же аналитик :)), читал всевозможные советы, сделал свое описание и решил послушать критику.
А заодно и узнать (пожалуй это самое важное) - насколько я могу быть востребован.
Честно говоря пока точно не знаю - зачем, но почему то хочется.

S Alex

Mobile: 011-7-926---* e-mail: alex******@gmail.com Skype: *********

Talented Systems Analyst with expertise in requirements, development, and implementation.
H1B visa sponsorship required.

Summary of qualifications
• More than 12 years of experience as Systems Analyst with focus in business software and systems.
• Expert knowledge of banking financial processes,
• Strong background working in bank with clients, designers, and programmers to identify requirements, provide cost analysis, assist with creating user interfaces, and develop implementation timelines.
• In-depth understanding of project lifecycle, including all phases of system and software development.
• Proven track record in development and analyzing.
• Superior communication, presentation, and interpersonal skills.
• Successful team management.

Technical Skills:
Bank’s big projects:
• Implemented automated banking system of retail banking business ABS Filial-bank in bank#1 (Russia, Moscow). 17 local banks, 25000 bank’s offices, 247. 2011-present time.
• Implemented automated banking system of retail banking business EGAR Technology (USA) in Uniastrum Bank (Russia, Moscow). Contain deposits, loans, mortgage, cards. 2500 users, 42 branches, 220 bank’s offices, 24
7. 2006-2009
• Implemented of Gemini platform – banking system for retail loans, internet-banking and remote client services in Alfa Bank (Russia, Moscow). 600 approved credit applications per hour, 24*7. 2004-2006

Professional knowledge:
• Using JAZZ and RUP methods for analyzing (BRD, FSD).
• Programming languages and technology:
o Expert knowledge of PHP, HTML, JavaScript, CSS, SQL
o Good experience in PL/SQL, AJAX, Java (J2EE/J2SE), SWING, Java servlet, SOAP, JSP
o Have experience in C, C++(MSVC), MFC, WIN32 API, ASP, Vbasic, Assembler, Pascal, Cobol, Fortran, etc.
• Tools and software: ,
o Expert knowledge of JAZZ, Oracle, PLSQL Developer, Eclipse, MS Project, MS Office, MS Visio, TestTrackPro
o Good knowledge of IntelliJ IDEA, WebSphere 6, DB/2, HP Service Desk, Crystal Report, Jasper Report, MS Visual Studio
• Sources codes management SVN, CVS, SourceOfSite (SOS).

BANK’S EXPERIENCE
05/2011 – present time, Analyst, #1 Bank Of Russia, Russia Moscow
• Analysis of the business processes in retail banking business,
• Gathering business requirements. Writing of document BRD.
• Gathering functional requirements. Writing project documentation for developers (FSD).
• Analyzing and verification requirements for completeness, consistency, comprehensibility, feasibility, and conformity to standards.
• Translating conceptual user requirements into functional requirements in a clear manner that is to understood to developers/project team.
• Formalization of the purposes and allocation of tasks of creation of new information IT-system of the company.
• Developing prototypes of interfaces based on the user requirements.
• Creating process models, specifications, diagrams, Use-Cases and charts to provide direction to developers.
• Developing and conducting peer reviews of the business requirements to ensure that functional requirement specifications are correctly interpreted.
• Recording software architecture in a software architecture document using use cases and the Unified Modeling Language (UML). Assisting with the interpretation of user requirements into feasible options, and communicating these back to the business stakeholders, and feedback creating for stakeholders.
• Managing and tracking the status of requirements throughout the project lifecycle; enforcing and redefining as necessary.
• Decomposition tasks, projects, division between the internal and external developers.
• Creation of detailed software design specifications.
• Writing all project documentation.
• Management of mini and small projects.
Used languages: JavaScript, HTML, SQL, J2SE
Used technologies: UML, AJAX, XML, SOAP, RUP,
Used software: Eclipse, IBM RRC, IBM RTC, IBM RQM, MS Office, MS Project, MS Visio

11/2006 – 08/2009, Analyst / Software Developer, Uniastrum bank Russia, Moscow, (Uniastrum Bank)
• developed and prepared to launch new bank retail products and business process
• adaptation of existing bank retail products and business processes - «Deposits», «Current Accounts», «Auto Loans», «Mortgage», «Credit Cards»
• implemented of EGAR LOANS system (Retail ABS)
• managed team of system analysts and java-developers (15 people);
• analyzed tasks, gathering business and system requirements, communicating these back to the business stakeholders, and feedback creating for stakeholders, worked out technical assignments (FSD), developed UML-diagrams
Used languages: Java, JavaScript, HTML, SQL, PL/SQL
Used technologies: UML, J2SE, JSP, SWING, AJAX, Velocity, XML, SOAP, Hibernate, Client-server
Used software: ORACLE 9, MsSQL 2000, IDEA, PL/SQL Developer, DBArtisan, OAS, MS Visual Studio, MS Project, MS Visio

04/2004 – 09/2006, Senior Developer, CJSC Trustec Russia, Moscow
Affiliated company BSC Praha BSC.
All projects only in AlfaBank (Moscow Russia, Alfa-Bank)
• provided localization of client-bank system - Home Banking Gemini in the Alfa bank
• developed new functional according to clients’ requirements in Alfa bank
• participated in international projects – «Client-bank», «Consumer Loans», «Retail loans», «Autofinancing», «Mortgage» in Alfa bank
• provided efficient interaction with foreign colleagues, used common data sources (working language of all projects - English)
• provided project management: planned development, assigned tasks for the developers, organized testing process, prepared test scripts
• managed work of outsourcers
• provided product support on the third level, provided incident’s examination
Used languages: Java, JavaScript, HTML, SQL, C/C++, VBasic
Used technologies: J2SE, SWING, XML, SOAP, Client-server
Used software: ORACLE 10, DB/2, IDEA, WebSphere 6, PL/SQL Developer, MS Visual Studio, MS Project, MS Visio
Education 1981 – 1987, Perm State University, Department of Mechanics and Mathematics
Specialist in Mathematics. University Master degree

Certificates:
IBM:
“WebSphere Application Server Administration”, “Rational Requirements Composer”, “Rational Quality Manager”, “Rational Team Concert”.

PM Expert:
“1601-PMBS924S: Project management in a company. Standard PMI PMBOK © Guide 2008”,
“1601-PMHR02: Project HR management”.

Luxoft Training Center: “Management of requirements. Basic course”

EGAR Technology (USA): “EGAR Loans Front Support Specialist”,
“EGAR Loans Back Office Support Specialist”,
“EGAR Loans Support Specialist and Programmer”

Public Education Centre: English level “Intermediate”.

Foreign languages:
Russian - fluent
English - technical - reading, writing, translating, conversational – intermediate
French – basic
Ukrainian – reading, conversational – good level

Personal qualities:
Team player, easy learner, strong analytical skills
Driver’s license: Russian B category

Technical Skills:
Bank’s big projects:
• Implemented automated

по идее, это должно быть типа major acomplishments. Big прожектс - так не пишут. Лучше оставить просто проджектс, насколько они large поймут из ваших цифр.

Professional knowledge:
• Using

Я бы скорее назвал это Technical Skills.

Have experience in C, C++(MSVC), MFC, WIN32 API, ASP, Vbasic, Assembler, Pascal, Cobol, Fortran, etc.

etc в этой строке глаз резануло.

• Gathering business requirements. Writing of document BRD.
• Gathering functional requirements. Writing project documentation for developers (FSD).

Во-первых все время “писание”, во вторых наверно таки лучше creating… ну в общем нечто подразумевающее именно создание, разработку.

Certificates:
IBM:
“WebSphere Application Server Administration”, “Rational Requirements Composer”, “Rational Quality Manager”, “Rational Team Concert”.

Поубирать все никому не нужные кавычки :slight_smile:
Я бы писал так:
Certification
IBM - тра-ля-ла
IBM - тра-ля-ля-ля
IBM - тро-ло-ло

О всяких персональных данных, языках и водительских удостоверениях тут уже миллион раз писали. Это называется attention to details тут :-))

Успехов

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Может я и зануда, но по резюме 12 лет аналитика не набирается :slight_smile:

На мой взгляд, даже в последней позиции аналитика получается мешанина из девелоперских активностей и задач аналитика.

Опишите текущую работу, как принято, в Present Simple: Analyze … Gather … Write / Create …; а не в ing-ой форме

Взорвало мозг! :slight_smile: Record architecture замените на что-нибудь типа create/develop/design architecture

В-общем, понятно, что крутой специалист, но резюме нужно улучшать. И это… английский еще раз в резюме проверьте.

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S Alex

Mobile: 011-7-926---* e-mail: alex******@gmail.com Skype: *********

Talented Systems Analyst with expertise in requirements, development, and implementation.
H1B visa sponsorship required.

Summary of qualifications
• More than 12 years of experience as Systems Analyst with focus in business software and systems.
• Expert knowledge of banking financial processes,
• Strong background working in bank with clients, designers, and programmers to identify requirements, provide cost analysis, assist with creating user interfaces, and develop implementation timelines.
• In-depth understanding of project lifecycle, including all phases of system and software development.
• Proven track record in development and analyzing.
• Superior communication, presentation, and interpersonal skills.
• Successful team management.
[b]ты бы продолжил еще
Happy father and husband :lol:

…Successful это ты так думаешь…надо писать о приложимых в твоей сфере качествах способностях и опыте а не о субьективных фантазиях [/b]
Technical Skills:
Bank’s big projects: совершенно лишний пункт, лучше это включить в описание работ.
• Implemented automated banking system of retail banking business ABS Filial-bank in bank#1 (Russia, Moscow). 17 local banks, 25000 bank’s offices, 247. 2011-present time.
• Implemented automated banking system of retail banking business EGAR Technology (USA) in Uniastrum Bank (Russia, Moscow). Contain deposits, loans, mortgage, cards. 2500 users, 42 branches, 220 bank’s offices, 24
7. 2006-2009
• Implemented of Gemini platform – banking system for retail loans, internet-banking and remote client services in Alfa Bank (Russia, Moscow). 600 approved credit applications per hour, 24*7. 2004-2006

Professional knowledge:
• Using JAZZ and RUP methods for analyzing (BRD, FSD). опять блин… Using это не knowledge. можно юзать и не знать…
• Programming languages and technology:
o Expert knowledge of PHP, HTML, JavaScript, CSS, SQL
o Good experience in PL/SQL, AJAX, Java (J2EE/J2SE), SWING, Java servlet, SOAP, JSP так не бывает…пиши expertise
o Have experience in C, C++(MSVC), MFC, WIN32 API, ASP, Vbasic, Assembler, Pascal, Cobol, Fortran, etc. убого звучит. ну сам подумай- пишешь есть опыт в… какой опыт?
• Tools and software: ,
o Expert knowledge of JAZZ, Oracle, PLSQL Developer, Eclipse, MS Project, MS Office, MS Visio, TestTrackPro
o Good knowledge of IntelliJ IDEA, WebSphere 6, DB/2, HP Service Desk, Crystal Report, Jasper Report, MS Visual Studio
• Sources codes management SVN, CVS, SourceOfSite (SOS).

…вообще надо выделить в чем ты профи и написать время опыта

BANK’S EXPERIENCE PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
05/2011 – present time, Analyst, #1 Bank Of Russia, Russia Moscow
• Analysis of the business processes in retail banking business,
• Gathering business requirements. Writing of document BRD.
• Gathering functional requirements. Writing project documentation for developers (FSD).
• Analyzing and verification requirements for completeness, consistency, comprehensibility, feasibility, and conformity to standards.
• Translating conceptual user requirements into functional requirements in a clear manner that is to understood to developers/project team.
• Formalization of the purposes and allocation of tasks of creation of new information IT-system of the company.
• Developing prototypes of interfaces based on the user requirements.
• Creating process models, specifications, diagrams, Use-Cases and charts to provide direction to developers.
• Developing and conducting peer reviews of the business requirements to ensure that functional requirement specifications are correctly interpreted.
• Recording software architecture in a software architecture document using use cases and the Unified Modeling Language (UML). Assisting with the interpretation of user requirements into feasible options, and communicating these back to the business stakeholders, and feedback creating for stakeholders.
• Managing and tracking the status of requirements throughout the project lifecycle; enforcing and redefining as necessary.
• Decomposition tasks, projects, division between the internal and external developers.
• Creation of detailed software design specifications.
• Writing all project documentation.
• Management of mini and small projects.
Used languages: JavaScript, HTML, SQL, J2SE
Used technologies: UML, AJAX, XML, SOAP, RUP,
Used software: Eclipse, IBM RRC, IBM RTC, IBM RQM, MS Office, MS Project, MS Visio
лишнее тут. лучше описать все один раз в Professional knowledge а не повторять

11/2006 – 08/2009, Analyst / Software Developer, Uniastrum bank Russia, Moscow, (Uniastrum Bank) вебсайт есть? включи сюда
• developed and prepared to launch new bank retail products and business process
• adaptation of existing bank retail products and business processes - «Deposits», «Current Accounts», «Auto Loans», «Mortgage», «Credit Cards»
• implemented of EGAR LOANS system (Retail ABS)
• managed team of system analysts and java-developers (15 people);
• analyzed tasks, gathering business and system requirements, communicating these back to the business stakeholders, and feedback creating for stakeholders, worked out technical assignments (FSD), developed UML-diagrams
Used languages: Java, JavaScript, HTML, SQL, PL/SQL
Used technologies: UML, J2SE, JSP, SWING, AJAX, Velocity, XML, SOAP, Hibernate, Client-server
Used software: ORACLE 9, MsSQL 2000, IDEA, PL/SQL Developer, DBArtisan, OAS, MS Visual Studio, MS Project, MS Visio опять повтор ненужный

04/2004 – 09/2006, Senior Developer, CJSC Trustec Russia, Moscow -вебсайт
Affiliated company BSC Praha BSC .
All projects only in AlfaBank (Moscow Russia, Alfa-Bank)
• provided localization of client-bank system - Home Banking Gemini in the Alfa bank
• developed new functional according to clients’ requirements in Alfa bank
• participated in international projects – «Client-bank», «Consumer Loans», «Retail loans», «Autofinancing», «Mortgage» in Alfa bank
• provided efficient interaction with foreign colleagues, used common data sources (working language of all projects - English)
• provided project management: planned development, assigned tasks for the developers, organized testing process, prepared test scripts
• managed work of outsourcers
• provided product support on the third level, provided incident’s examination
Used languages: Java, JavaScript, HTML, SQL, C/C++, VBasic
Used technologies: J2SE, SWING, XML, SOAP, Client-server
Used software: ORACLE 10, DB/2, IDEA, WebSphere 6, PL/SQL Developer, MS Visual Studio, MS Project, MS Visio снова ненужный повтор. ты думаешь кто-то несколько раз будет одно и то же перечитывать и искать отличия?
Education 1981 – 1987, Perm State University, Department of Mechanics and Mathematics
Specialist in Mathematics. University Master degree

Certificates:
IBM:
“WebSphere Application Server Administration”, “Rational Requirements Composer”, “Rational Quality Manager”, “Rational Team Concert”.

PM Expert:
“1601-PMBS924S: Project management in a company. Standard PMI PMBOK © Guide 2008”,
“1601-PMHR02: Project HR management”.

Luxoft Training Center: “Management of requirements. Basic course”

EGAR Technology (USA): “EGAR Loans Front Support Specialist”,
“EGAR Loans Back Office Support Specialist”,
“EGAR Loans Support Specialist and Programmer”

Public Education Centre: English level “Intermediate”.

Foreign languages:
Russian - fluent
English - technical - reading, writing, translating, conversational – intermediate
French – basic
Ukrainian – reading, conversational – good level
убрать это. ты на лингвиста устраиваешься? или рассеиваешь сомнения, что ты не забыл русский? это очень интересно.

Personal qualities:
Team player, easy learner, strong analytical skills убрать это- создать один раздел PROFESSIONAL SUMMARY и там себя хвалить
Driver’s license: Russian B category ну ты крутой тут будешь- с правами… или пишешь на случай если не возьмут в ИТ водилой подработать?

формулировок много не грамотных и не американских. а так пока есть что исправлять… а вообще не хватает уверенности в себе в описании и какой-то изюминки.

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expertise in requirements
what kind of expertise is that?

Strong background working in bank
Implemented of Gemini platform
Contain deposits, loans, mortgage, cards.
Translating conceptual user requirements into functional requirements in a clear manner that is to understood to developers/project team.
work on your English

Formalization of the purposes and allocation of tasks[
prototypes of interfaces/QUOTE] task allocation, interface prototypes, etc.

[QUOTE]developed new functional according to clients’ requirements in Alfa bank
functional what?

implemented of EGAR LOANS system
??

Foreign languages:
Russian - fluent
English - technical - reading, writing, translating, conversational – intermediate
French – basic
Ukrainian – reading, conversational – good level
if these are all foreign, what is your native language?

Driver’s license: Russian B category
nobody cares

и куда подевались все артикли?
a team
a system

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У меня самый первый вопрос - какое и когда у вас было образование. Если не ИТ-шное или не экономическое/финансистское (хотя это уже будет определенной проблемой), то рабочую визу будет получить проблематично.

И, как уже было сказано ранее, бросается в глаза разница между датами и заявленным сроком “системного анализа”. Если бы у вас было указано образование, то было бы понятнее, когда вы вообще начали работать. А так из резюме следует, что вы начали работать по специальности в 2004 году.

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Образование в разделе EDUCATION. Похоже его плохо видно… В вордовском файле добавил пустую строчку. Чтобы нагляднее конвертировалось в текст.

Я планировал сделать упор на банковский опыт, а не на весь имеющийся. Т.к. планирую продвигаться именно в финансовую сферу. Думаете не стоит? Лучше указать больше дат вообще опыта работы в анализе?
И кстати как лучше отразить тот факт, что очень часто приходилось не толко делать постановки задач, а и самому кодировать? Причин этому бывало несколько - или разработчика не было, или такого понапишут :).