Покритикуйте пожалуйста резюме

Уважаемые форумчане!
Покритикуйте пожалуйста моё резюме, в особенности на предмет грамматики/синтаксиса.

да вроде нормальное и довольно таки полное…прослеживается постоянный рост) кста отпишись как найдешь чего-нить по вакансии qa! в этой области мы коллеги :wink: но я грин карты у меня нету…надеюсь что пока

Ok. Let’s go… Resume neplohoje no mnogo 4ego pravut o4en…

1 sovet…kogda vukladivajew resume na sajte ne attach jego a vukladivaj celiakom priam kak message. Eto prosto forymchanam bydet menwe rabotu z otritijem fajla:)

  1. Summary is too long. Tu mozew vziat paru bulletov ottyda i perenestu y work Experience area. Sdelaj kazdij punkt dlinnee a ne po dva slova jesli eto vozmozno. Slovo ‘Professional’ ybirajew. Prosto SUMMARY.

  2. Date of birth: XX Jan 1985
    Email: XXXXXXXXX
    Skype: XXXXXXXXX
    Other: XXXXXXXXXXXX

Eto nepravilno. Nobody cares about your date of birth. Skip it. Esli tu v USA togda davaj cell. Skype ne nyzen. “Other” field dymaju ne nyzno.

idealnuj variant eto takoj naprimer:

[b]Andrey XXXXX

xxxx xxxx Street
Philadelphia, PA 19152
cell: xxxxxx
e-mail: xxxxxxxxxx[/b]

  1. Technical skills area dolnza bit posle SUMMARY!!

  2. A sej4as vozmys za PROFESSIOAN EXPERIENCE area))))

  • Mozew ybrat ‘Project name’. Nobody cares about it, pover mne.

  • “Was participated in”… eto nemnozko neprav z gram to4ki. Took participation or Was involved.

  • Ja ne ponimaju zachem tu razbil odno mesto rabotu na 3)) Kompanija odna i ta sama. Rootodatel naprimer mozet podymat wo tu rabotal v 3 raznuh firmah… ja naprimer tak i podymal. Esli tu bespokojiwsia pro PROJECT NAME to eto ne imeet smisla. As for me you make it as overall experience within one company.

  • Performed functionality = Perform functional

  1. Ybirajew privjazky k Green Card. Ona ne nyzna, toest ADDITION area.

  2. Vkonce obizatelno dodajew vot eto…

REFERENCES
Excellent professional and personal references available upon request

Vot i vse…Nemnozko ystal poka pisal:)) Nadejus ja pomog 4em to. Good Luck!

1 лайк

ilekhnych,

Огромное спасибо за критику!

Почти всё поправил кроме количества мест работы. Несмотря на то что компания одна, были разные проекты и самое главное - разные позиции: от Junior до Team Lead. Думаю это достаточно важно.

Вот что получилось:

Andrey XXXXXXXXXXX
Email: XXXXXXXXX
Skype: XXXXXXXXX
LinkedIn: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

OBJECTIVE: Highly skilled software QA engineer with working experience and broad exposure to various tasks and duties is looking for a position of Senior/Lead Software QA Engineer

SUMMARY:
• 5 years of experience in IT - telecommunications and e-Commerce
• 5 years of experience in software testing - both manual and automation
• Deep understanding of software development process
• Extensive experience in estimation process
• Extensive experience in team work coordination
• Experience in staff guidance/education
• Extensive experience in a broad range of tools and technologies
• Extensive experience in functional testing of web applications
• Experience in back-end, load testing
• Team player with strong interpersonal and communication skills
• Pro-active, self-motivated, results oriented
• Fast and positive when under pressure
• Strict attentive to detail

TECHNICAL SKILLS
• Operating Systems: Windows, Linux, Solaris, AIX
• Languages: VBScript, Object Pascal, SQL, XML
• Application Servers: WebLogic, WebSphere, JBoss
• Database: Oracle, MSSQL, MySQL
• Defect Tracking: JIRA, Bugzilla
• Test Case Management: TestDirector, Zephyr
• Automated Testing: QuickTest Pro, soapUI, JMeter
• Building Tools: ANT, Maven, TeamCity
• Version Control Systems: CVS, Perforce
• Project Management Tools: MS Project
• Office Software: MS Word, MS Excel, MS Outlook
• e-Commerce applications: Oracle ATG Web Commerce (Search, CA, Merchandising)

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Dec, 2009 – Oct, 2011
Company: Oracle/ATG (through EPAM Systems, Minsk office, Belarus)
Job Position: Senior Software QA Engineer
Project: Oracle ATG Web Commerce
Participation:
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of a part of huge e-commerce project, features and bugs verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Executed and analyzed automated test cases.
Participated both in general release cycle as well as support (patch releases).
Participated in project plan creation and maintenance (from QA side).
Created technical documentation
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro , Perforce, JIRA, MS Project, Zephyr, WebLogic Server, JBoss, WebSphere, Linux, Solaris, AIX, Oracle DB, MSSQL.

Jul, 2008 – Nov, 2009
Company: VPIsystems
Job Position: Software QA Team Leader
Project: OnePlan Server, OnePlan Mobile
Customers: NEC, Telstra, British Telecom, T-Mobile
Participation:
Performed QA team leader responsibilities: has 4 subordinates, performed task assignment, daily work progress review, personal progress review.
Worked under stress (1-2 release per 3 month simultaneously + patch releases) within agile software development methodology.
Took participation in project plan creation.
Owned test plans, test reports, quality metrics, management reports.
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of a big enterprise level project in telecommunications area as well as feature/bug verification.
Created manual test cases.
Took participation in automated test cases framework development (ANT, VBScript).
Created automated test cases using QTP (UI and WebServices testing using QTP and soapUI).
Performed back-end testing using SQL queries.
Created technical documentation
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro, soapUI, Apache JMeter, TOAD 9.1, Office 2007(Word, Excel), BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, ANT, Maven, Weblogic Server, Linux, Sun Solaris, Oracle DB.

Dec, 2007 – Jun, 2008
Company: VPIsystems
Job Position: Software QA Engineer
Project: OnePlan Server
Customers: Telstra, British Telecom
Participation:
Took participation in test plan development.
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of big enterprise level project in telecommunications area as well as feature/bug verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Took participation in automated test cases framework development (ANT, VBScript).
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro, TOAD 9.1, Office 2007(Word, Excel), BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, Weblogic Server, Sun Solaris, Oracle DB

Dec, 2006 – Nov, 2007
Company: VPIsystems
Job Position: Junior Software QA Engineer
Project: VPItransmissionMaker, VPIlinkConfigurator
Participation:
Perform functional, usability and installation testing of photonic design automation and optical equipment configuration products for more than 100 Universities in a world.
Performed features and bugs verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Tools, technologies and etc.: MS Excel, BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, MS Windows, Sun Solaris.

EDUCATION
• 2001 - 2004 Minsk State Supreme Radio College (MSSRC)
Specialization: Electronic-engineering resources
Speciality: engineer in electronics
• 2004 – 2007 Belarussian State University Of Informatics And Radioelectronics (BSUIR)
Specialization: Information Technologies
Speciality: programmer-engineer

REFERENCES
Excellent professional and personal references available upon request

В моем резюме summary вообще нет, к примеру, зато куски того что у тебя summary в вкраплены в objective.
Резуме - это карта того о чем тебя будут спрашивать. Поэтму отсортируй свои скилы по важности - с точки зрения тестера тестинг тулс важенее языков програмирования в большинстве случаев.

Несмотря на то, что Вы работали в одной и той же компании, при просмотре резюме возникает впечатление частой смены работы - если у работодателя пунктик на этот счет, то резюме пойдет в корзину.
Переформатируйте немного описание этого места работы, чтобы название компании и общий период работы были указаны один раз, а под ним ослеживался ваш карьерный рост и проекты.

Зачем запятые после месяцев?
Зачем вот эти повторяющиеся слова: Company, Job Position, Project, Participation?
Took participation это не по-английски. Либо took part, либо participated.

Ещё раз всем большое спасибо!
Вот что получилось, вроде неплохо выглядит…
Может кто-нибудь оценить мои шансы на получение позиции Senior или Lead с этим резюме и как думаете, где лучше начинать: в Силиконовой Долине, Нью-Иорке/Нью-Джерси или в районе Бостона?


Andrey XXXXXXXXXXX
Email: XXXXXXXXX
Skype: XXXXXXXXX
LinkedIn: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

OBJECTIVE: Highly skilled software QA engineer with working experience and broad exposure to various tasks and duties is looking for a position of Senior/Lead Software QA Engineer

SUMMARY:
• 5 years of experience in IT - telecommunications and e-Commerce
• 5 years of experience in software testing - both manual and automation
• Deep understanding of software development process
• Extensive experience in estimation process
• Extensive experience in team work coordination
• Experience in staff guidance/education
• Extensive experience in a broad range of tools and technologies
• Extensive experience in functional testing of web applications
• Experience in back-end, load testing
• Team player with strong interpersonal and communication skills
• Pro-active, self-motivated, results oriented
• Fast and positive when under pressure
• Strict attentive to detail

TECHNICAL SKILLS
• Defect Tracking: JIRA, Bugzilla
• Test Case Management: TestDirector, Zephyr
• Automated Testing: QuickTest Pro, soapUI, JMeter
• Operating Systems: Windows, Linux, Solaris, AIX
• Languages: VBScript, Object Pascal, SQL, XML
• Application Servers: WebLogic, WebSphere, JBoss
• Database: Oracle, MSSQL, MySQL
• Building Tools: ANT, Maven, TeamCity
• Version Control Systems: CVS, Perforce
• Project Management Tools: MS Project
• Office Software: MS Word, MS Excel, MS Outlook
• e-Commerce applications: Oracle ATG Web Commerce (Search, CA, Merchandising)

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Dec 2009 – Oct 2011
Company: Oracle/ATG (through EPAM Systems, Minsk office, Belarus)
Job Position: Senior Software QA Engineer
Project: Oracle ATG Web Commerce
Participation:
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of a part of huge e-commerce project, features and bugs verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Executed and analyzed automated test cases.
Participated both in general release cycle as well as support (patch releases).
Participated in project plan creation and maintenance (from QA side).
Created technical documentation
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro , Perforce, JIRA, MS Project, Zephyr, WebLogic Server, JBoss, WebSphere, Linux, Solaris, AIX, Oracle DB, MSSQL.

Dec 2006 – Nov 2009
Company: VPIsystems
Job Positions:
3rd year: Software QA Team Leader
Project: OnePlan Server, OnePlan Mobile
Customers: NEC, Telstra, British Telecom, T-Mobile
Participation:
Performed QA team leader responsibilities: has 4 subordinates, performed task assignment, daily work progress review, personal progress review.
Worked under stress (1-2 release per 3 month simultaneously + patch releases) within agile software development methodology.
Took participation in project plan creation.
Owned test plans, test reports, quality metrics, management reports.
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of a big enterprise level project in telecommunications area as well as feature/bug verification.
Created manual test cases.
Took participation in automated test cases framework development (ANT, VBScript).
Created automated test cases using QTP (UI and WebServices testing using QTP and soapUI).
Performed back-end testing using SQL queries.
Created technical documentation
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro, soapUI, Apache JMeter, TOAD 9.1, Office 2007(Word, Excel), BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, ANT, Maven, Weblogic Server, Linux, Sun Solaris, Oracle DB.

2nd year: Software QA Engineer

Project: OnePlan Server
Customers: Telstra, British Telecom
Participation:
Took participation in test plan development.
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of big enterprise level project in telecommunications area as well as feature/bug verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Took participation in automated test cases framework development (ANT, VBScript).
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro, TOAD 9.1, Office 2007(Word, Excel), BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, Weblogic Server, Sun Solaris, Oracle DB

	1st year: Junior Software QA Engineer

Project: VPItransmissionMaker, VPIlinkConfigurator
Participation:
Perform functional, usability and installation testing of photonic design automation and optical equipment configuration products for more than 100 Universities in a world.
Performed features and bugs verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Tools, technologies and etc.: MS Excel, BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, MS Windows, Sun Solaris.

EDUCATION
• 2001 - 2004 Minsk State Supreme Radio College (MSSRC)
Specialization: Electronic-engineering resources
Speciality: engineer in electronics
• 2004 – 2007 Belarussian State University Of Informatics And Radioelectronics (BSUIR)
Specialization: Information Technologies
Speciality: programmer-engineer

REFERENCES
Excellent professional and personal references available upon request

Всем ещё раз большое спасибо! Вроде неплохо получилось…
Может кто ещё посоветует куда лучше с таким резюме ехать, в San Francisco Area, New York Area или Boston Area? Где больше шансов найти хорошую и высокооплачиваемую работу?

Andrey XXXXXXXXXXX
Email: XXXXXXXXX
Skype: XXXXXXXXX
LinkedIn: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

OBJECTIVE: Highly skilled software QA engineer with working experience and broad exposure to various tasks and duties is looking for a position of Senior/Lead Software QA Engineer

SUMMARY:
• 5 years of experience in IT - telecommunications and e-Commerce
• 5 years of experience in software testing - both manual and automation
• Deep understanding of software development process
• Extensive experience in estimation process
• Extensive experience in team work coordination
• Experience in staff guidance/education
• Extensive experience in a broad range of tools and technologies
• Extensive experience in functional testing of web applications
• Experience in back-end, load testing
• Team player with strong interpersonal and communication skills
• Pro-active, self-motivated, results oriented
• Fast and positive when under pressure
• Strict attentive to detail

TECHNICAL SKILLS
• Defect Tracking: JIRA, Bugzilla
• Test Case Management: TestDirector, Zephyr
• Automated Testing: QuickTest Pro, soapUI, JMeter
• Operating Systems: Windows, Linux, Solaris, AIX
• Languages: VBScript, Object Pascal, SQL, XML
• Application Servers: WebLogic, WebSphere, JBoss
• Database: Oracle, MSSQL, MySQL
• Building Tools: ANT, Maven, TeamCity
• Version Control Systems: CVS, Perforce
• Project Management Tools: MS Project
• Office Software: MS Word, MS Excel, MS Outlook
• e-Commerce applications: Oracle ATG Web Commerce (Search, CA, Merchandising)

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Dec 2009 – Oct 2011
Company: Oracle/ATG (through EPAM Systems, Minsk office, Belarus)
Job Position: Senior Software QA Engineer
Project: Oracle ATG Web Commerce
Participation:
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of a part of huge e-commerce project, features and bugs verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Executed and analyzed automated test cases.
Participated both in general release cycle as well as support (patch releases).
Participated in project plan creation and maintenance (from QA side).
Created technical documentation
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro , Perforce, JIRA, MS Project, Zephyr, WebLogic Server, JBoss, WebSphere, Linux, Solaris, AIX, Oracle DB, MSSQL.

Dec 2006 – Nov 2009
Company: VPIsystems
Job Positions:
3rd year: Software QA Team Leader
Project: OnePlan Server, OnePlan Mobile
Customers: NEC, Telstra, British Telecom, T-Mobile
Participation:
Performed QA team leader responsibilities: has 4 subordinates, performed task assignment, daily work progress review, personal progress review.
Worked under stress (1-2 release per 3 month simultaneously + patch releases) within agile software development methodology.
Took participation in project plan creation.
Owned test plans, test reports, quality metrics, management reports.
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of a big enterprise level project in telecommunications area as well as feature/bug verification.
Created manual test cases.
Took participation in automated test cases framework development (ANT, VBScript).
Created automated test cases using QTP (UI and WebServices testing using QTP and soapUI).
Performed back-end testing using SQL queries.
Created technical documentation
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro, soapUI, Apache JMeter, TOAD 9.1, Office 2007(Word, Excel), BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, ANT, Maven, Weblogic Server, Linux, Sun Solaris, Oracle DB.

2nd year: Software QA Engineer

Project: OnePlan Server
Customers: Telstra, British Telecom
Participation:
Took participation in test plan development.
Perform functional, usability, installation testing of big enterprise level project in telecommunications area as well as feature/bug verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Took participation in automated test cases framework development (ANT, VBScript).
Tools, technologies and etc.: HP QuickTest Pro, TOAD 9.1, Office 2007(Word, Excel), BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, Weblogic Server, Sun Solaris, Oracle DB

	1st year: Junior Software QA Engineer

Project: VPItransmissionMaker, VPIlinkConfigurator
Participation:
Perform functional, usability and installation testing of photonic design automation and optical equipment configuration products for more than 100 Universities in a world.
Performed features and bugs verification.
Created and executed manual test cases prior to release cycle.
Tools, technologies and etc.: MS Excel, BugDB, Mercury TestDirector, MS Windows, Sun Solaris.

EDUCATION
• 2001 - 2004 Minsk State Supreme Radio College (MSSRC)
Specialization: Electronic-engineering resources
Speciality: engineer in electronics
• 2004 – 2007 Belarussian State University Of Informatics And Radioelectronics (BSUIR)
Specialization: Information Technologies
Speciality: programmer-engineer

REFERENCES
Excellent professional and personal references available upon request