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Summary:
Flash/Flex developer with creative and innovative ideas and over six years experience in client-server applications development, relational database analyzing, designing, and querying, multifunctional RIA creating, and GUI designing. Strong analytical skills combined with experience in object oriented programming techniques.
Technical skills:


Languages:…| ActionScript 2.0/3.0 (OOP), PHP (OOP, MVC, Smarty, CodeIgniter), SQL, HTML, CSS, XML, UML,XSLT, JavaScript (jQuery ,Ajax)
DBMS:…| MySQL, PostgeSQL, MSSQL, MS Access
CASE Tools:…| Sybase PowerDesigner, Rational Rose
Version Control:…| SVN
Development Environment:| Adobe Flash, Adobe Flex Builder IDE and plugin on Eclipse platform
Web Server: …| Apache
Graphics Software:…| Adobe Photoshop, 3ds MAX, Adobe After Effects


Experience and Qualifications:
Rich Internet Applications
• Architected, developed and led client-server application for comparative analysis of current petrol prices and exposes price movements on dynamic graphs
• Applied mathematical and statistical methods to analyze data and prepare graphs
• Created interpolation algorithm for graph construction
• Designed and developed database for the system’s backend data processing and transaction
• Wrote backend API/PHP scripts for database integration and replications
• Developed administrative interface
• Created URL validation
• Designed graphical user interface
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On-line flash games
• Flash/Flex physics, animation, trigonometry, and general game development
• Designed client-server communication protocol (Flash/Flex and Java)
• Created AI, flexible game engine, last hand function, interactive UI tool
• Implemented a server data warehouse (PHP, MySQL)
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Multimedia presentations
• Developed the interactive multimedia presentation for Web, CD/DVD ROM and kiosks
• Developed UI tools for managing video content
• Created a virtual tour, photo gallery, photo slide show
Developed for clients such as link1, link2 etc.
Software engine
• Developed software engine with used Swfmill
• Developed pseudo 3D Object control function
• Implemented loading data from external XML and SWF files
• Designed XML structure
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GUI design
• Conducted visual analysis of the client-side application
• Evaluated present design problems to enhance the look and feel as well as ease of use
• Redesigned and incorporated new workflows, mockups, specifications that effectively communicate the information architecture and interaction design
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Logos & branding
• Designed logo and branding
• Designed print material for the personal suite, including box art, promotional material, icons, and application artwork
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Education:
Tomsk State University of Control Systems and Radioelectronics
MS in Computer Science
Employment authorization:
H1B sponsorship required. (current location: ----)