В Украине 1С-ник. На что можно расчитывать в США? посмотрите резюме, плиз.

Нужна критика по резюме! Ну и по жизни… на что с этим можно расчитывать?

Programmer
Valery Vasilyev

Name: Valery Vasilyev
Skype: City-Cat83
Phone: +38(093)123 38 54 (Ukraine)
ICQ: 358388431
E-mail: vastok@mail.ru

Personal Information
Country: Ukraine (Ready to remove to USA)
City: Kiev
Education: University
Date of Birth: February 9, 1983 (27 years)
Gender: Male
Marital status: married, no children

Languages
Russian: Excellent.
Ukrainian: Excellent.
English: Good.

Computer Skills:

  • Knowledge of all components of 1C: Enterprise 7.7 (5 years experience);
  • MSSQL, MySQL, Access usage.
  • Knowledge of 1C: Enterprise 8.1 (2 years experience, accounting for Ukraine);
  • Knowledge of Delphi. Can write applications, com, CGI, work with data bases and other technologies;
  • Familiar with PHP, HTML, CSS, XML, MySQL. Can write and support websites.

Work experience

Period: Since December 2008
Position: Programmer 1C (7.7) (8.1)
Company: DEPS. Network equipment and means of communication trade.
Duties: Configuration and support 1C: Enterprise 7.7 for trading organizations. Accounting support (Accounting for Ukraine 8.1). Work with ITILIUM.

Period: November 2007 to December 2008
Position: Programmer 1C (8.1)
Company: “UkrMyaso”. Meat processing and packing factories, Kiev. (+38 (044) 279 64 13)
Duties: Implantation 1C 8.1 Accounting for Ukraine. Users training. Regular business trips to the remote factories. Further software development in accordance with the policy of the company. Training of users. Users’ work control, technical support.

Period: February 2007 to November 2007
Position: Software Department Chief
Company: MobiDik, Kiev (+38 (044) 495 78 76)
Cell phones trading network.
Duties: Software Department chief. Project management. Supervised three people.

Period: July 2006 to February 2007
Position: Programmer 1C
Company: 2K. A network of restaurants
Duties: Engineering of restaurant system and POS bar software.

Period: June 2005 to June 2006
Position: Software development department chief.
Company: Vents (+38 044 406 36 27)
Large industrial enterprise. About 120 users of 1C.
Duties: Was responsible for the accounting automation of manufacturing sector. Since February 2006, acted for a chief of the department. Supervised three programmers.

Period: October 2004 to June 2005
Position: Programmer-consulter
Company: BudMax, Kiev (+38 (044) 463 9820) Wholesale and retail stores network. Construction materials.
Duties: Staff training, bugs detecting in the configuration. Acted as a connection between developers and users (Support desk).

Period: May 2004 to October 2004
Position: Programmer 1C
Company: Rannila, Kiev (now Ruukki) (+38(044)201-45-42 ask “Alexey Boyko” IT director)
manufacturing of roofing and other building materials
Duties: Design and implantation manufacturing and logistics modules.

Period: January 2003 to April 2004
Position: Programmer 1C.
The company: Agat, Melitopol (+38(06192) 6-83-86 ask “Elena Yrievna” chief Accountant)
Cars accessories manufacturing.
Duties: An engineer-programmer position (1C implantation) and three months
as an accountant. Worked in many areas of industrial enterprise: manufacturing, operating system, wage, warehouse

Education
Degree: bachelor
Graduation Date: May 2005
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: Accounting and Auditing

Education
Degree: associate
Graduation Date: May 2002
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: programmer of computer systems

Trainings:
All courses on the platform of 1C: Enterprise 8.0
School: Integra (2006)
Running time: 120 hours
Finished: February 2006

Вебер, ну начинающий, развивайте свои навыки в веб програмировании, и глубже в БД, если вы имеете ввиду штаты.
В БД, больше стратовая зарплата, в вебе больше вакансий и чаще рост… токмо всякие флеши и прочее, подтяните и неплохо бы какой нить действующий сайт показать на спивбеседе

1с останется в украине…

переименуйте 1С Enterprise в "MS SQL based ERP system for medium/small size enterprises "1C Enterprise " и жить станет проще :slight_smile:

На что можно вообще рассчитывать с таким резюме?

С таким ни на что, конкретики мало, и настрой технического интервьюера (если HR решит “схалявить” и дело до него дойдёт) будет преотвратным.

Пишите чётче - что именно делали, каких результатов (желательно сравнительных с тем, что было “до того как”) этим “что” удалось достичь и т.д. .Пока не бойтесь расписать на 5-6-7-100 страниц. Выкидывать лишнее куда проще, чем доливать воду потом.

Фраз вида “ездил по командировкам” и “дописывал софт согласно полиси компании” без объяснения того “зачем” и описания сногсшибательного успеха результата в резюме быть не должно вообще

Что можно писать в заголовке? какую должность?

Спасибо за ценную критику.
Вот переработал резюме:

Programmer
Valery Vasilyev

Name: Valery Vasilyev
Skype: City-Cat83
Phone: +38(093)123 38 54 (Ukraine)
ICQ: 358388431
E-mail: vastok@mail.ru

Personal Information
Country: Ukraine (Ready to remove to USA)
City: Kiev
Education: University
Date of Birth: February 9, 1983 (27 years)
Gender: Male
Marital status: married, no children

Languages
Russian: Excellent.
Ukrainian: Excellent.
English: Good.

Computer Skills:

  • Knowledge of all components of 1C: Enterprise 7.7 (5 years experience);
  • MSSQL, MySQL, Access usage.
  • Knowledge of 1C: Enterprise 8.1 (1 year experience, accounting for Ukraine);
  • Knowledge of Delphi. Can write applications, com, CGI, work with data bases and other technologies;
  • Familiar with PHP, HTML, CSS, XML, MySQL. Can write and support websites.

Work experience

Period: Since November 2007
Position: Programmer 1C (7.7) (8.1)
Company: DEPS. Network equipment and means of communication trade.
Duties: Configuration and support 1C: Enterprise 7.7 for trading organizations. Accounting support (Accounting for Ukraine 8.1). Work with ITILIUM.

Period: November 2007 to December 2008
Position: Programmer 1C (8.1)
Company: “UkrMyaso”. Meat processing and packing factories, Kiev. (+38 (044) 279 64 13)
Duties: Implantation 1C 8.1 Accounting for Ukraine.сTeam development of the corporate system based on the new at that moment 1C 8.1. Introduction of the new system at a meat processing plant with making business processes meet key corporate requirements. Users’ work control, technical support. Automated plant in Bahmach (personal project).

Period: February 2007 to November 2007
Position: Software Department Chief
Company: MobiDik, Kiev (+38 (044) 495 78 76)
Cell phones trading network.
Duties: Software Department chief. Project management. Supervised three people.

Period: July 2006 to February 2007
Position: Programmer 1C
Company: 2K. A network of restaurants
Duties: Engineering of restaurant system and POS bar software. Finally, all restaurants of the “2К” net have been transferred onto new system, including the new fashionable restaurant in the centre of Kiev “LeoClub”.

Period: June 2005 to June 2006
Position: Software development department chief.
Company: Vents (+38 044 406 36 27)
Large industrial enterprise. About 120 users of 1C.
Duties: Automatization of the new production departments management. Support of the accounting and administrative reporting. Improvement of the logistic service, system of production planning and development of the internal CRM system. Supervised three programmers.

Period: October 2004 to June 2005
Position: Programmer-consulter
Company: BudMax, Kiev (+38 (044) 463 9820) Wholesale and retail stores network. Construction materials.
Duties: Staff training, bugs detecting in the configuration. Acted as a connection between developers and users (Support desk). User manuals creation for the automated workplaces according to the business processes. New employees’ training at opening three new shops by Budmaks.

Period: May 2004 to October 2004
Position: Programmer 1C
Company: Rannila, Kiev (now Ruukki) (+38(044)201-45-42 ask “Alexey Boyko” IT director)
manufacturing of roofing and other building materials
Duties: Design and implantation manufacturing and logistics modules. Development of the orders control system at Rannila Kiev manufacture.

Period: January 2003 to April 2004
Position: Programmer 1C.
The company: Agat, Melitopol (+38(06192) 6-83-86 ask “Elena Yrievna” chief Accountant)
Cars accessories manufacturing.
Duties: An engineer-programmer position (1C implantation) and three months
as an accountant. Worked in many areas of industrial enterprise: manufacturing, operating system, wage, warehouse. Till now this plant works with mine solutions.

Education
Degree: bachelor
Graduation Date: May 2005
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: Accounting and Auditing

Education
Degree: associate
Graduation Date: May 2002
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: programmer of computer systems

Trainings:
All courses on the platform of 1C: Enterprise 8.0
School: Integra (2006)
Running time: 120 hours
Finished: February 2006

Версия 3 добавил: "MS SQL based ERP system for medium/small size enterprises “1C Enterprise” Вместо 1С

Programmer
Valery Vasilyev

Name: Valery Vasilyev
Skype: City-Cat83
Phone: +38(093)123 38 54 (Ukraine)
ICQ: 358388431
E-mail: vastok@mail.ru

Personal Information
Country: Ukraine (Ready to remove to USA)
City: Kiev
Education: University
Date of Birth: February 9, 1983 (27 years)
Gender: Male
Marital status: married, no children

Languages
Russian: Excellent.
Ukrainian: Excellent.
English: Good.

Computer Skills:

  • Knowledge of all components of MS SQL based ERP system for medium/small size enterprises “1C Enterprise” 7.7 (5 years experience);
  • MSSQL, MySQL, Access usage.
  • Knowledge of 1C: Enterprise 8.1 (2 year experience, accounting for Ukraine);
  • Knowledge of Delphi. Can write applications, com, CGI, work with data bases and other technologies;
  • Familiar with PHP, HTML, CSS, XML, MySQL. Can write and support websites.

Work experience

Period: Since November 2007
Position: Programmer of ERP system “1C Enterprise” (7.7) (8.1)
Company: DEPS. Network equipment and means of communication trade.
Duties: Configuration and support 1C: Enterprise 7.7 for trading organizations. Accounting support (Accounting for Ukraine 8.1). Work with ITILIUM.

Period: November 2007 to December 2008
Position: Programmer of ERP system “1C Enterprise” (8.1)
Company: “UkrMyaso”. Meat processing and packing factories, Kiev. (+38 (044) 279 64 13)
Duties: Implantation 1C 8.1 Accounting for Ukraine.сTeam development of the corporate system based on the new at that moment 1C 8.1. Introduction of the new system at a meat processing plant with making business processes meet key corporate requirements. Users’ work control, technical support. Automated plant in Bahmach (personal project).

Period: February 2007 to November 2007
Position: Software Department Chief
Company: MobiDik, Kiev (+38 (044) 495 78 76)
Cell phones trading network.
Duties: Software Department chief. Project management. Supervised three people.

Period: July 2006 to February 2007
Position: Programmer 1C
Company: 2K. A network of restaurants
Duties: Engineering of restaurant system and POS bar software. Finally, all restaurants of the “2К” net have been transferred onto new system, including the new fashionable restaurant in the centre of Kiev “LeoClub”.

Period: June 2005 to June 2006
Position: Software development department chief.
Company: Vents (+38 044 406 36 27)
Large industrial enterprise. About 120 users of 1C.
Duties: Automatization of the new production departments management. Support of the accounting and administrative reporting. Improvement of the logistic service, system of production planning and development of the internal CRM system. Supervised three programmers.

Period: October 2004 to June 2005
Position: Programmer-consulter
Company: BudMax, Kiev (+38 (044) 463 9820) Wholesale and retail stores network. Construction materials.
Duties: Staff training, bugs detecting in the configuration. Acted as a connection between developers and users (Support desk). User manuals creation for the automated workplaces according to the business processes. New employees’ training at opening three new shops by Budmaks.

Period: May 2004 to October 2004
Position: Programmer of ERP system “1C Enterprise”
Company: Rannila, Kiev (now Ruukki) (+38(044)201-45-42 ask “Alexey Boyko” IT director)
manufacturing of roofing and other building materials
Duties: Design and implantation manufacturing and logistics modules. Development of the orders control system at Rannila Kiev manufacture.

Period: January 2003 to April 2004
Position: Programmer 1C.
The company: Agat, Melitopol (+38(06192) 6-83-86 ask “Elena Yrievna” chief Accountant)
Cars accessories manufacturing.
Duties: An engineer-programmer position (1C implantation) and three months
as an accountant. Worked in many areas of industrial enterprise: manufacturing, operating system, wage, warehouse. Till now this plant works with mine solutions.

Education
Degree: bachelor
Graduation Date: May 2005
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: Accounting and Auditing

Education
Degree: associate
Graduation Date: May 2002
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: programmer of computer systems

Trainings:
All courses on the platform of 1C: Enterprise 8.0
School: Integra (2006)
Running time: 120 hours
Finished: February 2006

уже лучше, но конкретики все-равно мало

  1. отредактируйте личные данные (если не сделали этого раньше … не думаю, что Вы сейчас уже ищете работодателя на форуме, а кто только его не читает).

  2. по форуму посмотрите на темы про резюме, там есть неплохие примеры (и разобраны классические ошибки)

  3. Исправьте в языках excellent на native или fluent , good на Intermediate (можете поставить upper intermediate, advanced на интервью Вы пока доказать не сможете :slight_smile: )исправьте все can на “able to”, и попробуйте найти кого-нибудь более-менее говорящего и вычистить все ляпы (
    к примеру “ready to remove” убивает на месте :slight_smile: )

Чтобы не выглядеть совсем уж злым приведу пример (ау ветераны - покритикуйте мой вариант тоже пожалуйста)

Исходный текст:
Engineering of restaurant system and POS bar software. Finally, all restaurants of the NNN net have been transferred onto new system, including the new fashionable restaurant in the centre of …

как это (с моей точки зрения) должно звучать

Architected and supervised transfer of XXX net ( 12345 locations, 23456 system users, 34567 legacy systems , 63543435 sales transactions daily ) to central ERP system on schedule and on (under) budget ( 3455345 mln ukranian dollars project , team of 435435 people ). The most important location ( 456456 users, 252432 transactions, 24324 daily turnover ) was transferred within 1 hour 20 minutes on tuesday morning (off peak hour)

overal 243232 original user roles, and 324324 transactions were converted into new functionality. POS intergation was essencial part of the project and was done …

дальше тот же текст но уже про POS

туда же доливается конкретика про то, что собственно было дописано в 1С для этого счастья (в голове следует держать что читатель не знает кто такой 1С и чем он отличается от 1Е, но зато точно знает что такое транзакция, раундтрип, респонс тайм и т.п. )

удачи

Размещаю это безобразие на монстрах.

можете поставить upper intermediate, advanced на интервью Вы пока доказать не сможете :slight_smile:

Может лучше оставить. Дело как бы субъективное… :slight_smile: Думаю через 3 месяца практики в США английский буду Ацтреливать.

can на “able to”

ОК.

попробуйте найти кого-нибудь более-менее говорящего и вычистить все ляпы

Жена пишет статьи для английских сайтов…

“ready to remove” убивает на месте :slight_smile: )

Да. Не заметил… :slight_smile:

Architected and supervised transfer of XXX net ( 12345 locations, 23456 system users, 34567 legacy systems , 63543435 sales transactions daily ) to central ERP system on schedule and on (under) budget ( 3455345 mln ukranian dollars project , team of 435435 people ). The most important location ( 456456 users, 252432 transactions, 24324 daily turnover ) was transferred within 1 hour 20 minutes on tuesday morning (off peak hour)
overal 243232 original user roles, and 324324 transactions were converted into new functionality. POS intergation was essencial part of the project and was done …

Да я сам всего этого не знаю. Штук 60 ресторанов по области было. 3 внедренца… Я желания исполнял - они ставили. (как джин прям :slight_smile: )

удачи

Спасибо.

Версия 4

Programmer
Valery Vasilyev

Name: Valery Vasilyev
Skype: City-Cat83
Phone: +38(093)123 38 54 (Ukraine)
ICQ: 358388431
E-mail: vastok@mail.ru

Personal Information
Country: Ukraine (Ready to move to the USA)
City: Kiev
Education: University
Date of Birth: February 9, 1983 (27 years)
Gender: Male
Marital status: married, no children

Languages
Russian: native.
Ukrainian: native.
English: Advanced.

Computer Skills:

  • Knowledge of all components of MS SQL based ERP system for medium/small size enterprises “1C Enterprise” 7.7 (5 years experience);
  • MSSQL, MySQL, Access usage.
  • Knowledge of 1C: Enterprise 8.1 (2 year experience, accounting for Ukraine);
  • Knowledge of Delphi. Able to write applications, com, CGI, work with data bases and other technologies;
  • Familiar with PHP, HTML, CSS, XML, MySQL. Able to write and support websites.

Work experience

Period: Since November 2007
Position: Programmer of ERP system “1C Enterprise” (7.7) (8.1)
Company: DEPS. Network equipment and means of communication trade.
Duties: Configuration and support 1C: Enterprise 7.7 for trading organizations. Accounting support (Accounting for Ukraine 8.1). Work with ITILIUM.

Period: November 2007 to December 2008
Position: Programmer of ERP system “1C Enterprise” (8.1)
Company: “UkrMyaso”. Meat processing and packing factories, Kiev. (+38 (044) 279 64 13)
Duties: Implantation 1C 8.1 Accounting for Ukraine.сTeam development of the corporate system based on the new at that moment 1C 8.1. Introduction of the new system at a meat processing plant with making business processes meet key corporate requirements. Users’ work control, technical support. Automated plant in Bahmach (personal project).

Period: February 2007 to November 2007
Position: Software Department Chief
Company: MobiDik, Kiev (+38 (044) 495 78 76)
Cell phones trading network.
Duties: Software Department chief. Project management. Supervised three people.

Period: July 2006 to February 2007
Position: Programmer 1C
Company: 2K. A network of restaurants
Duties: Engineering of restaurant system and POS bar software. All restaurants of the “2К” net in Kiev region (about 50 restaurants) have been transferred onto new system, including the new fashionable restaurant in the centre of Kiev “LeoClub”.

Period: June 2005 to June 2006
Position: Software development department chief.
Company: Vents (+38 044 406 36 27)
Large industrial enterprise. About 120 users of 1C.
Duties: Automatization of the new production departments management. Support of the accounting and administrative reporting. Improvement of the logistic service, system of production planning and development of the internal CRM system. Supervised three programmers.

Period: October 2004 to June 2005
Position: Programmer-consulter
Company: BudMax, Kiev (+38 (044) 463 9820) Wholesale and retail stores network. Construction materials.
Duties: Staff training, bugs detecting in the configuration. Acted as a connection between developers and users (Support desk). User manuals creation for the automated workplaces according to the business processes. New employees’ training at opening three new shops by Budmaks.

Period: May 2004 to October 2004
Position: Programmer of ERP system “1C Enterprise”
Company: Rannila, Kiev (now Ruukki) (+38(044)201-45-42 ask “Alexey Boyko” IT director)
manufacturing of roofing and other building materials
Duties: Design and implantation manufacturing and logistics modules. Development of the orders control system at Rannila Kiev manufacture.

Period: January 2003 to April 2004
Position: Programmer 1C.
The company: Agat, Melitopol (+38(06192) 6-83-86 ask “Elena Yrievna” chief Accountant)
Cars accessories manufacturing.
Duties: An engineer-programmer position (1C implantation) and three months
as an accountant. Worked in many areas of industrial enterprise: manufacturing, operating system, wage, warehouse. Till now this plant works with mine solutions.

Education
Degree: bachelor
Graduation Date: May 2005
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: Accounting and Auditing

Education
Degree: associate
Graduation Date: May 2002
Faculty: Economic
Specialty: programmer of computer systems

Trainings:
All courses on the platform of 1C: Enterprise 8.0
School: Integra (2006)
Running time: 120 hours
Finished: February 2006

все-таки “ready to move” я бы заменила на “ready to relocate”)
Знание английского вынесла бы на первую строчку (кого в штатах будет интересовать украинский?)), а сам блок “знание языков” отправила бы в конец резюме.

И вообще… жене дайте вычитать?
А то и впрямь безобразие: “Implantation 1C 8.1 Accounting for Ukraine.”

А почему вообще не выкинуть? Здесь, вроде, такого не пишут, даже спрашивать нельзя.

Английский язык, я слышал, вообще в резюме не пишется, подразумевается, что все знают.:slight_smile:

Вот еще Cover letter на суд Олла

Hello!

I am interested in the vacancy.

I was born in the Southern part of Ukraine and I am a native Russian speaker. During last seven years I am working as a programmer Russian ERP system “1C:Enterprise”. I’d like to move to the USA. I’d be a valuable employee for the American company which deals with the Russian customers. Besides that, I’d like to stay in the IT field in order to improve myself in this direction. I have two degrees: 3 years one which is an equivalent of the American “associate degree” (specialty “programmer”) and second one which is equivalent to the American “bachelor degree” (specialty “accounting”).

Valery Valiliev
Skype: City-Cat83
Phone: +38(093)123 38 54 (Ukraine)
ICQ: 358388431
E-mail: vastok@mail.ru

Сеть предприятий, магазинов и т.д по-здешнему chain, а не network.

Главное, я, к примеру, так и не понял, Вы код писали или параметры настраивали при внедрении этой самой 1С? На других работах?

А то и впрямь безобразие: “Implantation 1C 8.1 Accounting for Ukraine.”

А как правильно сказать: “Внедрение 1С:Предприятия. Конфигурация бухгалтерский учет для Украины” (хотя врятле буржуям что нибудь скажет название новой модной конфигурации… :slight_smile: ).

Гугл дает “Implementation of the system” хотя я сомневаюсь в правильности термина.

для “внедрения” мы обычно использовали “integration”.
По крайней мере в телекоме компании, занимающиеся внедрением, обычно называют “системными интеграторами”)

Внедрение новой технологии — adoption of new technology, innovation.

На разных работах по разному. В основном код писал. Было время и на сервисе работал и техническое задание раздавал.

Просто чтоб внедрить 1С из коробки параметрами дело не ограничивается. Приходится очень много кодить. Тут приходится и напильником подправлять написанное, и хотелки клиентов в систему интегрировать…

Позвольте вернуться к истокам:

Если честно, я даже представить себе не могу, зачем американцам 1С-ник. :slight_smile: