Прошел год. И я опять с резюме. За это время язык стал чуть лучше, работа появилась первая. Но нужно двигаться дальше. Скажите пожалуйста о косяках резюме. Оно мне нравится (по сравнению с прошлогодним, здесь - http://www.govorimpro.us/работа-в-сша/29875-нужна-критика-cv-и-cover-letter.html) и это опасно! ))) Нужна критика со стороны! Я учла все советы, выкинула лишнее, не относящееся к инженерной направлености (кроме текущей позиции) Муж получил сертификаты. Короче, год был подуктивным. Мы старались как могли.
Сover letter:
Dear Hiring Manager!
I am writing to express my interest in this opportunity with [Company name].
Your job description for a [Position] perfectly matches my qualifications, and I am very interested in the opportunity. I have a bachelor degree in Mechanical Engineering and would like to use my knowledge of engineering techniques in the fields of mechanical design and in all related fields. I have a strong ability to design, produce analyses, calculate, create 2D and 3D mechanical drawing.
I have more than 6 years experience in technical positions. My career includes 3 years as Mechanical Engineer assistant for a Russian Research and Design Institute of Power Engineering (Heavy Construction industry). I have been involved in design parts of storage vessels with heating systems and other systems. Among other duties I produced drawings and generated bills of materials.
As a Field service engineer in Chemical industry I’ve been immersed in composing test procedures, conduct tests and final reports for the 2 years as well as created and revised preventive maintenance procedures. Right now I’m working in Oil and Gas industry.
The [position] at [Company name] excites me: I have the technical skills they need, and I’m ready to be challenged.
I look forward to speaking with you and hearing more details about the position. I have attached my resume for your consideration.
Resume:
ZAKHAR XXXXX
Permanent resident
Email: zakarxxxx@gmail.com
XXXX South Mason Rd, Apt #XXX
Katy, TX 77450
Phone: (832) XXX-XXXX
Seeking for a full time position in the Mechanical/Design Engineering field which provides me an opportunity to enhance my skills and expand my knowledge
QUALIFICATIONS AND SKILLS:
• 6 years of experience in Chemical, Heavy Construction and Oil and Gas industries.
• Extensive knowledge of designing, repairing, and installation various equipment.
• Experience in SolidWorks, AutoCAD.
• Skilled to read Blueprint, Engineering Drawings, Loop Diagrams, Electrical Diagrams.
• Ability to interpret ASME Codes
SERTIFICATION:
• SolidWorks Associate Certificate
• SolidWorks Professional Certificate
EMPLOYMENT HISTORY:
October 2011 – Present
Company: Welker Engineering, Inc.
Title: Assembler
Duties and responsibilities:
• Assemble sampling equipment for Oil and Gas industry to specification
• Provide Hydro and Functional tests
• Make Change Notice for engineering department to improve design and quality of product .
October, 2009 - March, 2011
Company: Diversey, Inc.
Title: Field Service Engineer
Duties and responsibilities:
• Repaired and provided routine maintenance of specialized cleaning and dozing equipment.
• Installed automatic systems and dosing equipment for producing washing-up liquids.
• Tested the equipment for standard requirements.
• Created and revised preventive maintenance procedures.
• Provided regular service for the sold equipment and technical consultation for clients.
• Participated in equipment presentation.
May, 2006 - September, 2009.
Russian Research and Design Institute of Power Engineering.
Title: Mechanical designer assistant.
Duties and responsibilities:
• Used SolidWorks and AutoCAD to create 3D models and mechanical drawings of Pressure Vessel
• Prepared documentation such as specifications, calculations. Used GOST Standard.
• Created Bill of Materials
• Software application: SolidWorks, AutoCAD, MathCad, MS Office.
EDUCATION:
• BS of Mechanical Engineering. Moscow State Tech University of Press, 2007