Резюме под критику - TOFIK-RV

[SIZE=1]OBJECTIVE
Motivated and ambitious young specialist seeking a challenging position as trainee in the USA where I can apply all the knowledge and skills I have and contribute my own share to the development and prosperity of the organization I will work for.

QUALIFICATIONS AND SKILLS
Languages: English (Fluent), Ukrainian, Russian and Polish (Native), learning German and Spanish.
Over one year of experience in heat-engineering.
Participant of Work&Travel USA Program (2008, 2009, 2010).
Participant of lots school and university Olympiads.
Work well with others, have team spirit, leadership, organizational & planning skills.
Cheerful and sociable, easy find contact with different people.
Ability to quickly learn and understand corporate needs and technology.
Journalist/photograph of Federation Internationale de Motocyclisme, journalist of European Motorcycle Union.
International driver license category B.
Extensive experience with Internet Explorer, HTML, web design, full pack of Microsoft Office, AutoCAD (solidworks), Kompas 3D, Photoshop, lots of video-editing programs. (Windows and Macintosh environments)

PERSONAL ACTIVITIES / ADDITIONAL
Swimming, playing ice hockey, excellent health, non-smoker.

EDUCATION
1995 – 2005
School #12 of Rivne specializing in Math and English Language

2005 – 2009
National university of water management and nature resources use
Rivne, Ukraine
Bachelor of heat-engineering

2009 – 2010
National university of water management and nature resources use
Rivne, Ukraine
Power system engineer-specialist

EXPERIENCE

From 03/2007
xxx Rivne, Ukraine
Web-designer, owner, manager, video-editor, camera-operator
Designing, maintaining site, creating custom web graphics, daily maintenance of a global website and many of it’s localized sites. Daily news, photos and video updates, online result broadcasting live from stadium during competition. Assembling the final video production of whole sport competition, experimented with styles and techniques, selected the most effective shot of a scene, preparing whole video for DVD.

05/2008 – 11/2008
xxx Sunny Isles Beach, Florida
Designer, web-site manager
Design and production of flayers, posters etc. for the periodic and private parties. Layout and design of advertisements with attention to detail.

05/2008 – 09/2008
xxx North Miami Beach, Florida
Foreman
Providing residential, commercial and long distance moving service with the best customer service, taking care of fast and quality service, allocate tasks to team members.

06/2009 – 09/2009
06/2010 – 09/2010

xxx L.L.C., Craig, Alaska
Freezing department lead, freezer maintenance
Managing department staff to support continuous 24hr non-stop process of fish freezing. Distribution of staff in shifts, rotation staff in the department during the shifts. Permanent inspection of department for troubleshooting or stopping of the equipment. Providing statistics of processing speed, total and daily weight of processed fish, adjusting the speed of processing between departments to achieve well coordinated work of the whole plant.

10/2009 – 06/2010
xxx Rivne, Ukraine
Ice skating instructor
Teaching basic skating and hockey skills to children and adults at all levels.

09/2010 – present
xxx Rivne, Ukraine
Ice rink refrigeration system engineer, zamboni driver
Provide the maintenance for solid, safe, and clean ice surfaces, maintain ice resurfacers and ice making water treatment system including water boiler/heater; and maintain a clean and organized maintenance area. Monitor/Read/Record ice floor and ice surface temperature, air temperature and humidity levels, and other ice plant performance metrics and service records and make adjustments when necessary. Monitors and resurfaces the ice in order to maintain safe conditions for patrons.

Жду критику![/SIZE]

А что критиковать-то?
Резюме имеет определенную структуру. В вашем резюме она отсутсутвует.
Резюме пишется с определенной целью. Цели абсолютно не ясны.

Motivated and ambitious young specialist seeking a challenging position as trainee in the USA where I can apply all the knowledge and skills I have and contribute my own share to the development and prosperity of the organization I will work for.

Какую позицию в какой конкретно отрасли вы ищете? Или просто денег дать хотите, что недвусмысленно следует из второй части фразы?

На какую работу вы возьмете человека, приславшего такое резюме, да еще и с непонятным визовым статусом?

Это не резюме.
Давайте с самого-самого начала. Какую позицию Вы ищете?

Ето резюме спонсору общее просто на апликейшн для Career Training (Traineeship)

Тяжело понять что Вы имеете ввиду. У Вас уже есть спонсор или Вы его просто ищете? Career Training в какой области?

Спонсорское агенство есть, они будут искать работодателя.
Career Training - Heat-engineering

Так оно (агенство) никогда никого не найдет.
Странный Вы человек… Спрашиваете совета, но категорически не хотите ему следовать.

Дохлый номер.
Перепишите резюме с нуля под этот heat engineering.

Ладно, спасибо, все равно уже найшли…оформляемся!