Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме (Supply Chain Manager) большое спасибо

Доброго времени суток всем, вот составили мужу резюме, пожалуйста, покритикуйте, английский не очень((( спасибо всем большое

PROFESSIONAL
SUMMARY
Experienced Supply Chain Management. Experience working with all types of delivery (sea, land and air)Skilled in the management Quick learner, always willing to learn, creative work habits. Quickly adaptable and able to multitask in the changing technical and managerial atmospheres, that are common in today’s marketplace. Excellent analytical and problem solving skills, possessing strong oral and written communicative skills.

TECHNICAL
SKILLS Platforms:
MS Windows (2000, XP, Vista, 7, Server 2000, Server 2003,
Server 2008), Linux (Red Hat, Ubuntu, SUSE), Mac OS X ,
BES Server, MS Exchange 2003, 2007, Cisco IOS, Citrix Xen, VMware

Software:2010 (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Visio, Outlook, etc.), Adobe Photoshop CS 5, Adobe illustrator cs5MS Office 2003, 2007,

Hardware: Laptops, Desktops, Servers, Printers, Routers, Switches, IP phones, CCTV equipment etc.

PROFESSIONAL
EXPERIENCE

LLC “Trading House” Dobroedovo ", Moscow, Russia
Supply Chain Manager 07/2010 – 03/2011
• Coordination of an uninterrupted supply chain of raw meat for sausage production for three plants.
• Experience working with all types of delivery (sea, land and air)
• Management of the Department of vehicular transport
• Control and optimization of the cost of shipping
• Communicate any supplier discrepancies or situations that may impact a process to appropriate department
• Experience in working with customs authorities, knowledge of policies and customs clearance instructions
• Maintained relationships with approved suppliers and seek out new suppliers and manage their ongoing performance per quality guidelines
• Manage inventory levels of components as applicable
• Maintained purchase documentation per standards including vendor certifications, and performance records
• Ongoing work to improve the business process and technical enhancements.
• Create and present various reports to management as requested

Ltd. “Linkom Plus”, Moscow, Russia
Supply Chain Manager 02/2009 – 07/2010
• Coordination of an uninterrupted supply chain of goods
• Management of the Department of vehicular transport
• Management reporting and feedback on supply chain metrics.
• Manage inventory levels of goods as applicable
• Control and optimization of the cost of shipping
• Interaction and regulation of transport permits in MVC
• Problem Solving with positive attitude
• Ongoing work to improve the business process and technical enhancements.
• Create and present various reports to management as requested

Ltd. Evraservis, Moscow, Russia
Supply Chain Manager 12/2007 – 11/2008
• Management of the Department of Transport
• Control and optimization of the cost of shipping
• Resolve delivery, quality, or invoicing problems, as required
• Interaction and regulation of transport permits in MVC
• Problem Solving with positive attitude
• Ongoing work to improve the business process and technical enhancements.
• Create and present various reports to management as requested
Logistical Expert - Supply Chain 03/2007 – 12/2007
• Control and optimization of the cost of shipping
• Resolve delivery, quality, or invoicing problems, as required
• Problem Solving with positive attitude
• Ongoing work to improve the business process and technical enhancements.
• Create and present various reports to management as requested
Logistical Specialist - Supply Chain 04/2006 – 03/2007
• Resolve delivery, quality, or invoicing problems, as required
• Problem Solving with positive attitude
• Ongoing work to improve the business process and technical enhancements.
• Create and present various reports to management as requested

EDUCATION
State University North-Caucasian Mining and Metallurgical, Vladikavkaz, Russia

Bachelor of Science degree financing and credit 09/1999-06/2004

PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT COURSES

Financiers and accountants

Мне не хочется Вас обижать, но резюме нужно полностью переписывать. Вы используете слова и выражения, которые звучат как прямой перевод с русского на английский. Попробуйте поискать примеры резюме в Supply Chain, посмотрите описание позиций, которые выкладывают работодатели, и возьмите выражения оттуда. Раздел Hardware вообще не нужен, и так понятно, что человек умеет работать на компьютере. Кроме сухого описания обязанностей необходимо указать конкретные результаты в цифрах (деньги, количество складов, перевозок и т.д.), которых достиг сотрудник. Особенно хорошо смотрится снижение расходов на что-либо. Также неплохо указывать какие-то крупные проекты, тоже в конкретных цифрах.

Спасибо Вам большое! блин:blush:обиднее всего то, что я делала именно так, как Вы советуете( а за крупные проекты отдельное спасибо, все укажем. :flo:

ну такого бы вы тут не нашли :slight_smile:

Control and optimization of the cost of shipping

ну это да( это переводчик :blush:

Skilled in the management
и такого тоже…